What do you think of this poster I made?

**Eismann** · July 11th, 2006 11:40 AM

Freetaste sa mga tsikoteer, suggestion lang.

**jim** · July 11th, 2006 11:49 AM

i kinda like it. the colors can effectively attract the eyes. good work!!!

**GlennSter** · July 11th, 2006 11:57 AM

i like the colors!

**ILuvDetailing** · July 11th, 2006 12:03 PM

My 0.02...

You should put a picture of your product, a bigger picture, there's too much open space in the middle. Although you have a picture at the lower right, its not enough, too small.

**badkuk** · July 11th, 2006 12:41 PM

i have to agree with the earlier posters, imho there should be a donut somewhere on the poster; baka di kasi magets na tao B)

**baludoy** · July 11th, 2006 12:44 PM

nawala yung poster. wala ako ma-click. sayang

**Chip** · July 11th, 2006 12:47 PM

same comment with the others.
the product should be easily visible. at first i thought it was some kind of junk food

**baiskee** · July 12th, 2006 12:16 AM

some minor builds:
- bigger branding
- put shadows to add depth from the background

ok...nice layout. ;)

**OTO** · July 12th, 2006 11:51 PM

To everyone: thanks for the feedback and here is the update. still no box of 12 pcs donuts cause naubusan agad. Will try again to get a shot of the 12 donuts tomorrow. I was a bit wrestles so I did another config with the feedback I got. If I didnt incorporate your suggestions I may do so in a later time when I got the box of donuts. Some suggestions dont work w/o the box of donuts.

Without a due pls critic again. I need negative feedback to improve & be effective. BTW I missed out the "for a dozen" would've made it "a dozen"