What do you think of this poster I made?

[Chip]

It definitely looks better than the previous ones.

I dont like the drawing of the "people" sharing, they either look like ghosts or sperm (depending on the mindset of the person viewing), kasi black and white sila whereas everything else is colorful.

[OTO]

It definitely looks better than the previous ones.

I dont like the drawing of the "people" sharing, they either look like ghosts or sperm (depending on the mindset of the person viewing), kasi black and white sila whereas everything else is colorful.

No problem about logo, i've heard far worse comments. :) It does draw people's attention, don't you think?
Will try the S shape but gotta try to make it work first.

"Hoopies" is the name of the product line. ;)

I think the bottom red border's curve should be S-like parang katawan ng tsiks. Para masaya si sir M54... :grin: *** sells diba? Even kung di overt yung presentation.

Masyado malaki and boxy yung box. I still think na dapat mga one or two donuts lang ang pic superimposed on a white oval background. I also think na instead of 2D top view, skew yung shot angle a little para may konting depth yung donuts. This way, di masyado malaking space makuha, and you emphasize your product more.

Also, since the shop is called Hoops... maybe it's better kung Hoops na rin on top of the P120 instead of Hoopies... unless this is a slogan of some sort.

Oh yeah, still don't like the sherriff's star. :happy:

HTH

[wren]

insert mo picture ni angelica panganiban na naka-bikini tsaka naghuhula-hoop, siguradong best seller yan.

[OTO]

Thanks for the help. This is the final poster that got printed. converting the psd to .jpg screwed up the color of the donuts.



http://hoopsdonuts.com/

[Flagg]

Oooh, nice donut pic! Great work sir oto! (Although the sheriff & sperm are still there )

[roninblade]

looks great! nice work.

[jedi]

nice work, great design....


now... where's our free donuts? heheheh

[mfo]

Great Job Free taste

[OTO]

Concerning sa free donut/taste will be working on it. Who do I approach on Tsikot concerning this?

[van_wilder]

I think the bottom red border's curve should be S-like parang katawan ng tsiks. Para masaya si sir M54... *** sells diba? Even kung di overt yung presentation.

HTH

good one!

pero the final one is good actually... pero sana masmaliit yun mga logos ng mga locations... pero anyway its still good...