Letting love pass you by...

**gretzy** · February 25th, 2004 11:47 AM

i dont think it will win a creative writing contest in up,the professors here are very particular with the language being used

**CaRGirL** · February 28th, 2004 12:20 AM

para sakin... awww ung kwento, kze ako hopeless romantic ang dating, kung sakin nangyari un, gosh! nung araw pa lang ng kasal, tutol na ko!!! di ko na hahayaang makasal sila!!! hehehehe...

and another thing, kung eto talaga nanalo, wag na natin kwestunin DBA? kung hindi naman, deadma na lang, wala naman magbabago kung eto nga nanalo o hindi EH...

kanya kanya lang talaga sigurong TASTE yan...

u cant please EVERYBODY naman e...

**odell** · February 28th, 2004 12:50 AM

Originally posted by Bianx
talaga bang uso na ang tag-lish sa mga modern articles?
madami-dami narin ako kasing nababasa na parang ganyan ang format.. yung sinusulat ng author ang saktong salita kung pano nya ikukwento yung story pag kausap mo sya ng magkaharap kayo. (medyo hindi ko kasi gusto ang tag-lish... nakakinis kasi minsan basahin at pakinggan.. lalo na yung gumagamit ng "me" sa text)

**opinyon ko lang po ito.. pasensya na kung may natamaan =)

feeling critic naman ako... tama na nga yan... ika nga ni odell... inuman nalang! hehe! banzai!!! =)

oh,kelan?. haha..

cargirl,
oks lang yan.. related ba sayo?

**CaRGirL** · February 28th, 2004 01:06 AM

odell di nman related... pero touching lang talaga sya... apektado ako! hehehe...

**Bianx** · February 28th, 2004 01:41 AM

Originally posted by odell
[B]oh,kelan?. haha..

hehe! parang dapat naka-link ata to sa cyber inuman na thread... mukha kasing mahilig sa inuman mga tao dun eh.. hehe =)

**SubaruSti** · March 16th, 2005 12:05 AM

Wow! parang soap opera yun a. pero ok yung story.

**odell** · March 16th, 2005 12:22 AM

grabe un mga thread nabubuhya bigla.hehehe.. grabe.. kakainlab.. parang kahit paulit ulit walang sawa

**ts1n1ta** · March 16th, 2005 12:24 AM

ang lufeeet ng last line!!!

hmmm actually *suot glasses* (odiba feeling amf) nde ko den gusto yung text abbreviations. The story was ok, not an expected winner, but it's ok.

**odell** · March 16th, 2005 12:48 AM

ok ka dyan :p hehehehe feeling ko umiiyak ka na diyan eh. hehehe joke

**ts1n1ta** · March 16th, 2005 12:54 AM

*punas luha* nde naman...

pero ang lufeeet ng last lineeeee!!

**van_wilder** · March 16th, 2005 12:54 AM

lesson: masama magpigil... kung type ang lalaki... makipag*** agad...

**van_wilder** · March 16th, 2005 12:56 AM

grad party nanamin tommorrow... maginarte kaya ako at sabihan lahat ng crush ko sa batch na type ko siyal tapos sabihin ko sa kanya may feelings ako natinatago... hehehehehe

**ILuvDetailing** · March 16th, 2005 01:51 AM

Its a nice story but I think its overused, parang napanood ko sa movie dati almost the same pero dito di sila nagkatuluyan. Well if that did happen in real life, fate must not have been on the girl's side, lahat ng kapalpakan na pwede mangyari ay nangyari

. Pero bat taglish? gulat ako dun ah ganda na sana ng simula pero biglang nagtagalog ang loka loka, its either english or tagalog o baka naman may taglish na subject nayahahahaha! Have to agree with Tsinita the last line was the killer.

**cyberdoc95** · March 16th, 2005 07:43 PM

Nagtaka lang ako bakit hindi ko ito nabasa before! February of last year pa pala ito!He he he!!

Anyway, I'm just a little disappointed sa style ng writing. My 15-year-old niece can write better that this. In formal writing, taglish is definitely not a good thing. Even more so, using abbreviations or shortened words. Ok lang dito sa forums, but not on a paper in a creative writing class..And on top of that, sa UP pa..He he he..

I've done writing better than this back in high school at Ateneo de Davao!...

I'm hoping this is just a high school paper and not in college!

**BlueGirl** · March 16th, 2005 09:52 PM

ang alam ko meron na sa email nyang story na iyan...palagay ko ang moral lesson lang ay, kung mahal mo edi wag mo na pakawalan!!!ang hirap kasi yung iba pakipot pa mahal naman pala!!!hehehe..ayan tuloy...

**cutedoc** · March 19th, 2005 12:32 AM

cheesy but true=)

stories as such may just be fictional but they are nirroring the society, needs and wants, with such story, readers and viewers(as for telenovela)are compelled to parallel they life with the story, somehow they find a part of their life or most of their life in the reflection of the stories they read or watch.

**gearspeed** · March 19th, 2005 02:11 AM

ang hirap kasi yung iba pakipot pa mahal naman pala!!!hehehe..ayan tuloy...

parang yung first love ko kase pagnagkikita kami nun talagang tumitingin siya at tumitingin naman ako..

pero ang sakit nung pinost ni OTEP mas lalo pa ako nainlove kay Dianne nito ayoko talagang pakawalan yung first love ko na yun ..

**yomar** · March 19th, 2005 02:38 AM

may isa pang ganyan akong nasa email kaso sobrang haba. feeling ko baka pagalitan ako ng mods eh. hehehe. nabasa ko na to before. yoko lang nung last line din.

meron na bang thread on "how would you know if you already love a person?"

**karlbo** · March 19th, 2005 02:44 AM

ganda nung story ahh.. mas maganda na talagng maging open ka kung anu man ang nararamdaman mo.. kung anu ang nasa puso mo siyang sundin mo heheh kahit anu man ang maging consequence, at least nasabi mo kung anu man ang nararamdaman mo towards sa iba di ba!? ang point dun eh at least you tried.. kahit anu man ang maging outcome whether good or bad, go on... take the risk..

**BlueGirl** · March 19th, 2005 11:50 AM

saka minsan lang makahanap ng tao na may "spark" kayo sa isat-isa...mararamdaman mo naman un kung gusto mo siya at gusto ka din,kung paano nyo itreat ang isat-isa..diba?either iakyat sa susunod na level ang relationship or friends nalang talaga...

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